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Modeller room

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Fisheye lens perspective practice.

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome.

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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Once again, you do not fail to amaze. Where to even start...The composition and subject matter really just drag my eye all across the room. I literally feel as though I need to explore it, haha. Going into further detail on compositional arrangement, I'd like to really praise the fact that it almost feels like a literal maze whether i'm looking at the female character then all the way to the book case, the scale model character set to the right that weaves me through the monitor and the desk all the way to the bed, and the dark magician girl(cameo appearance, that's adorable) scale model across the purple box to the door. AND yet again, an amazingly masterful work of light variation and high lights, not only on the character's skin but everything in the room. The fish-eye illusion also makes this piece more immersive, as if i'm being wrapped inside the room. A few nit picks, and seriously, I really had to look for an hour to notice, but there's what seems to be an isolated indent on the green cutting mat. What I mean is, the desk seems to evenly bow and curve to the fish eye illusion, while the green mat seems to stop and go flat at the red-handled pliers. I also feel that the muscle on the heel of the girl's right hand could use more emphasis. It sort of oddly smooths into the fore arm that makes me feel like there should be more distinction between the hand and arm. The purple chair by the computer desk also seems to almost defy the fish eye illusion. while every piece of subject matter curves in towards the center of the art piece, the desk chair seems to retain its normal shape. Please don't think I'm trying to insult, it's just you've gotten so amazingly good that I need to critique even more seriously than I usually do. I appreciate you putting your time and effort into this for us to see.