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Where is my love? by ilolamai Where is my love? by ilolamai
Where is my love? (╯□)╯︵ ┻━┻

O...Okay ┬─┬ ノ( ゜-゜ノ)

Forever alone... T__T

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome.

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:iconabsolutepineapple:
This is a very stunning piece, and very accurate. The anatomy is great, as well as the perspective and the layout of the room. I'm assuming this is meant to be a Japanese schoolroom, due to the uniforms and the fact that It looks exactly like one. It takes me back to when I went to Japan and spent a day in the life of a high school student, every detail is accounted for!
The wide variety of hair styles and colors make the picture visually engaging, and it makes the viewer feel like all these gorgeous girls are looking at them, which makes it even more appealing. The coloring is beautiful, a perfect mix of smooth and cel shading, and the shadows are all accurately placed and well drawn.

I have only a few suggestions that I would give to the picture. Firstly, the hair on some of the girls, while very well shaded, could use a bit more dark color in it. On some of the girls in the back it's easy to see the outline of the hair, and a darker layer of shadows would help to hide that. The other thing would be a bigger difference in expressions. Some of them work, but wider eyes, larger mouths, and raised eyebrows are just a few things that could be done. Both of those suggestions are NOT necessary, but I personally think it would look better with it.

Either way, it's an incredibly well done piece, and you drew it from your feelings, so it makes it that much more meaningful. I love it and hope to see more from you! Keep up the amazing work!
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I think this is beautiful! Everything moves, everything's so crisp and detailed, and the picture is well done. The classroom itself is almost alive and looking at it, I feel as though I'm in it as well. You did a great job with the lighting, you always do and it's impressive. Your colors are beautiful and really bring out a lot in this picture, especially the characters. They're really in a positive looking environment, you can see it clearly on their faces. Overall, this piece of work is amazing! You make things flow and come to life so well, your colors are vibrant and do a lot for the picture, and although classrooms are a bit overdone to me, you really know how to make it original and amazing. I've never seen such a happy and active classroom to be honest and you did a great job on creating that. Keep up the good work, I hope to see more from you in the future.
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Manga-Samurai Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How comes there all wearing different uniforms?
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
Eh...sorry.I don't know neither,i just want to draw it like this.
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:iconmanga-samurai:
Manga-Samurai Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I thought it was like a school trip, lots of other schools came to one for a competition or something
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:iconxandamus:
Xandamus Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013   General Artist
yeah...who's who!?!?
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:iconlinkonpark:
Linkonpark Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student Artist
Aww, my lover is in an all-girls' school! What to do???
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
when in Rome, do as the Romans do 

You must be a girl too.I can recommend you a good doctor...
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:iconlinkonpark:
Linkonpark Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student Artist
Huuuh? But what about the old fashioned way???
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
No.There is gender test.So,you have to cut that thing of you before entering the school...
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:iconlinkonpark:
Linkonpark Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Student Artist
What about waiting outside school? Or sending...duh luuuve letter?
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
That's a good idea.You should do that.
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:iconlinkonpark:
Linkonpark Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Student Artist
Yeah. Too bad the guards are too useless.
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:iconmarikadaa:
marikadaa Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you.
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yefta03 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me : excusme.....where is the XII B Classes
Girl 1 : go too left
Girl 2 : no..go to north
Girl 3 : you guys are wrong....go to right
Girl : no no no...go to hall west....

*its make a chain reaction,every girls in this class point at the diferent ways*

Me :
:iconfffffplz::iconuuuuuplz:
:iconcccccplz::iconkkkkkplz:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Hahaha.
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:iconyefta03:
yefta03 Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yep
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Hahaha.That's what i want you to feel.
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:iconyefta03:
yefta03 Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
and then they all replied
:iconumadbroplz:
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:iconedgar-chan:
Edgar-Chan Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Manhow long has it been since you last updated your gallery with newdeviations
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
8 months.
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:iconedgar-chan:
Edgar-Chan Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
okay
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:iconfanartj:
fanartj Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
Great work! Really moves and shows a gambit of emotions.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you.
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:iconpegasusforever:
pegasusforever Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Now to follow the finger signs... Wait. Looks like I misguided. :/
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Hahaha.
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:iconpegasusforever:
pegasusforever Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Girls: U mad bro? :icontrollfaceplz:
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:iconcj-db:
CJ-DB Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012   Traditional Artist
Great job and very pretty :love:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you cjdb.
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:iconanimamomentlover:
animamomentlover Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
a person get lost from fallowing these fingers. :psychotic:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Indeed.
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:iconanimamomentlover:
animamomentlover Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

what ever happen to the olden days where you could say out loud

"where is this guy!?"

and everyone would point in the same direction?

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:iconsalamanderflame:
salamanderFLAME Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
*sad that none are pointing at me* Q3Q
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Hahaha.
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:iconkylust69:
kylust69 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol XD
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Heheh^^
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:iconroddy1990:
Roddy1990 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
( •_•) <How about...


























( •_•)>⌐■-■


























(⌐■_■) <...all of them?











:iconthumbsupplz::iconlooolplz:



Well done, man! :iconsaluteplz: :iconhigh5plz:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Hahaha.Thank you very much.
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:iconroddy1990:
Roddy1990 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
:iconbrofistemoteplz:
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:iconxhikarichanx:
XHikariChanX Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
nice
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thanks.
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:iconxhikarichanx:
XHikariChanX Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
U r welcome ^_^
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:iconviceman:
viceman Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
สาวๆ...สาวๆ เต็มไปหมด ♥

สุดยอดมากครับ รูปนี้ ^^
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
ขอบคุณครับ จัดเต็มซะหน่อย
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:iconredarmyinspace:
redarmyinspace Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
Wow, you put a lot of effort into this. I admire that.
Great work by the way.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you very much.
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:iconubhe22:
ubhe22 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
cool i love it
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
I'm glad that you love it.
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srcpcsoha Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
this had to have taken you forever and a day. OAO

but it looks so brilliant.

Personally, I like the girl to the left of the picture, with the purple hair and the brown uniform, pointing to the right. She just looks so unintrested. xD
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you very much for your compliment.I'm glad that you like her.
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:iconsrcpcsoha:
srcpcsoha Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're very welcome~ c:
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