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Where is my love? by ilolamai Where is my love? by ilolamai
Where is my love? (╯□)╯︵ ┻━┻

O...Okay ┬─┬ ノ( ゜-゜ノ)

Forever alone... T__T

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome.

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This is a very stunning piece, and very accurate. The anatomy is great, as well as the perspective and the layout of the room. I'm assuming this is meant to be a Japanese schoolroom, due to the uniforms and the fact that It looks exactly like one. It takes me back to when I went to Japan and spent a day in the life of a high school student, every detail is accounted for!
The wide variety of hair styles and colors make the picture visually engaging, and it makes the viewer feel like all these gorgeous girls are looking at them, which makes it even more appealing. The coloring is beautiful, a perfect mix of smooth and cel shading, and the shadows are all accurately placed and well drawn.

I have only a few suggestions that I would give to the picture. Firstly, the hair on some of the girls, while very well shaded, could use a bit more dark color in it. On some of the girls in the back it's easy to see the outline of the hair, and a darker layer of shadows would help to hide that. The other thing would be a bigger difference in expressions. Some of them work, but wider eyes, larger mouths, and raised eyebrows are just a few things that could be done. Both of those suggestions are NOT necessary, but I personally think it would look better with it.

Either way, it's an incredibly well done piece, and you drew it from your feelings, so it makes it that much more meaningful. I love it and hope to see more from you! Keep up the amazing work!
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I think this is beautiful! Everything moves, everything's so crisp and detailed, and the picture is well done. The classroom itself is almost alive and looking at it, I feel as though I'm in it as well. You did a great job with the lighting, you always do and it's impressive. Your colors are beautiful and really bring out a lot in this picture, especially the characters. They're really in a positive looking environment, you can see it clearly on their faces. Overall, this piece of work is amazing! You make things flow and come to life so well, your colors are vibrant and do a lot for the picture, and although classrooms are a bit overdone to me, you really know how to make it original and amazing. I've never seen such a happy and active classroom to be honest and you did a great job on creating that. Keep up the good work, I hope to see more from you in the future.
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Kimiko-Mazuki Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
How comes there all wearing different uniforms?
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Xandamus Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
yeah...who's who!?!?
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:iconlinkonpark:
Linkonpark Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student Artist
Aww, my lover is in an all-girls' school! What to do???
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
when in Rome, do as the Romans do 

You must be a girl too.I can recommend you a good doctor...
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:iconlinkonpark:
Linkonpark Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Student Artist
Huuuh? But what about the old fashioned way???
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
No.There is gender test.So,you have to cut that thing of you before entering the school...
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:iconlinkonpark:
Linkonpark Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013  Student Artist
What about waiting outside school? Or sending...duh luuuve letter?
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
That's a good idea.You should do that.
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:iconlinkonpark:
Linkonpark Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013  Student Artist
Yeah. Too bad the guards are too useless.
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marikadaa Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool
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