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Submitted: November 13, 2012
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Where is my love?by ~ilolamai

Manga & Anime / Digital Media / Paintings

Where is my love? (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻

O...Okay ┬─┬ ノ( ゜-゜ノ)

Forever alone... T__T

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome.

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Critique by =Serinji Dec 19, 2012, 3:57:04 AM

I think this is beautiful! Everything moves, everything's so crisp and detailed, and the picture is well done. The classroom itself is almost alive and looking at it, I feel as though I'm in it as well. You did a great job with the lighting, you always do and it's impressive. Your colors are beautiful and really bring out a lot in this picture, especially the characters. They're really in a positive looking environment, you can see it clearly on their faces. Overall, this piece of work is amazing! You make things flow and come to life so well, your colors are vibrant and do a lot for the picture, and although classrooms are a bit overdone to me, you really know how to make it original and amazing. I've never seen such a happy and active classroom to be honest and you did a great job on creating that. Keep up the good work, I hope to see more from you in the future.

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Critique by *AbsolutePineapple Nov 13, 2012, 7:49:15 AM

This is a very stunning piece, and very accurate. The anatomy is great, as well as the perspective and the layout of the room. I'm assuming this is meant to be a Japanese schoolroom, due to the uniforms and the fact that It looks exactly like one. It takes me back to when I went to Japan and spent a day in the life of a high school student, every detail is accounted for!
The wide variety of hair styles and colors make the picture visually engaging, and it makes the viewer feel like all these gorgeous girls are looking at them, which makes it even more appealing. The coloring is beautiful, a perfect mix of smooth and cel shading, and the shadows are all accurately placed and well drawn.

I have only a few suggestions that I would give to the picture. Firstly, the hair on some of the girls, while very well shaded, could use a bit more dark color in it. On some of the girls in the back it's easy to see the outline of the hair, and a darker layer of shadows would help to hide that. The other thing would be a bigger difference in expressions. Some of them work, but wider eyes, larger mouths, and raised eyebrows are just a few things that could be done. Both of those suggestions are NOT necessary, but I personally think it would look better with it.

Either way, it's an incredibly well done piece, and you drew it from your feelings, so it makes it that much more meaningful. I love it and hope to see more from you! Keep up the amazing work!

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~marikadaa May 4, 2013 New member

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~yefta03 Apr 21, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Me : excusme.....where is the XII B Classes
Girl 1 : go too left
Girl 2 : no..go to north
Girl 3 : you guys are wrong....go to right
Girl : no no no...go to hall west....

*its make a chain reaction,every girls in this class point at the diferent ways*

Me :