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Where are you going? by ilolamai Where are you going? by ilolamai
A: Ummm, miss?
B: What?
A: Where are you going?
B: My House.
A: Dressed like that?
B: Yes. What's wrong?
A: Eh...no...Good luck.

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome.

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:iconwolfantom:
Absolutely excellent job! You've really applied the detail in a professional and very presentable way. I would have used more spectral, futuristic colours if I were to do something similar as oppose to this 90's esuqe style (this is especially with the car interior, her style of swimsuit + manual gears), but that's just me =P. I like extreme originality instead of basic my work of existing aesthetics.

Her old style car and fingerless gloves reminds me a lot of Misato Katsuragi from Neon Genesis Evangelion.

Improvements [Gosh.. if any..]:
>Her sandals/thongs (aussie slang here xD) could use a touch more well proportional work.

>The droplets are a little too prominent, it really gives the impression she's sopping wet. But this may be down to your personal choices for this work, plus judging by the title and her gloves they may as well be in a rushing, action situation.

Other than that, your ability to apply crisp original details outdo my current abilities.
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incredible work here. i must say, the coloring, lineart light effect, shading propotions & anatomy. everything is very good. and i cant see any flawes on it. well except one thing. she looks to small for the car. i mean if you look cloesly it looks like she barely can see from the front glass, or maybe this is just because the seat is pushed back too much.
anyway yeah.
vision: its pretty damn good a real EYE CANDY. from the cute girl to the car detailes. and the little TV i bet it took you a time just to draw it. and the background, well i assume its the beach , but its not very clear to see. her expression is kinda bland though

originality: well...cant really say its original but its a nice idea. wich not alot of pepole do. espacily making the car control on the right side instead of the left .

technique: i have nothing to complain on this one. i mean i never can do something as amazing as this. the lineart is very well done. the coloring is very based and is not too bright that it will hurt the eyes and the shading is PERFECT.

impact: well for me. its not really something special but i still do like it and i can look at it for a long time cuz of all the small detailes

so in overall its very good and a nice piece of art ^^
8.5 of 10
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:icontaures-15:
Taures-15 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Pretty pic!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Thank you very much.
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:icontaures-15:
Taures-15 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
:D
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:iconwindskin92:
Windskin92 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
is she watching a movie? i know that it is one of your pictures but i'm just curious :?
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
I tried to make it looked like TV screen.But she did not watch it,just listened to the sound.
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:iconroddy1990:
Roddy1990 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
It must be really hot out there =P Anyway, she can't turn the air-conditioning [ON] yet :roll: :lmao:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Hahaha.Yes,indeed.
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:iconroddy1990:
Roddy1990 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
\o/
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:iconmatthew1926:
matthew1926 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
beautiful as always, love it!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you matthew.I'm glad that you love it.
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:iconteturo:
teturo Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
Deliciously sexy sensei :meow:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you teturo.
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:iconteturo:
teturo Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Welcomes my friend ^_^
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:icondistantwanderer:
DistantWanderer Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
Corrected:

A: Ummm, miss?
B: What?
A: Where are you going?
B: My House
A: Dressed like that?
B: Yes. What's wrong?
A: Eh...no...Good luck.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Wow!Thank you very much.I corrected it.
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:iconprophosphere:
Prophosphere Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Such a big car & tiny girl :rofl:
I want to sit beside her D:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Hahaha.
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:iconanimationsbyrobert:
AnimationsByRobert Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:iconpervyakihiroplz:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
^__^
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:icongeno-bahamut:
Geno-Bahamut Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
She seems a bit thin to me, hehe.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Heheh,i see.
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:iconartemisumi:
Artemisumi Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
กว่าจะถึงบ้านตัวแห้งพอดี
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
ใช่เลย
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:iconhokokistudio:
HokokiStudio Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
I always forgot . most of other country drive on the right ahah. Great stuff like always (≧▼≦;)
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Yeah.Thank you.
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:iconaeronator:
Aeronator Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awesome job as always. :3
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you very much.
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:iconaeronator:
Aeronator Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome.
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:iconpauldy:
pauldy Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
Wet Driver.. ^^
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Yeah!
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:iconzetmii:
Zetmii Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
Amazing work! Congrats!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you very much.
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:iconao968:
AO968 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
It must be quite hot there; she's sweating like a pig. No wonder she's driving in her swimsuit.

And eh... does she take hitchhikers? A hot girl like that can't be left on her own out there, especially one so skimpily dressed. :horny:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Yeah,it's so hot here.
If she can find them.
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:iconartfurry:
ArtFurry Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Student General Artist
this is amazing :wow:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you very much.
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:iconnicodestruction:
NicoDestruction Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
I love your style so much...it's so perfect! And the hair...it's coloured so damn fantastic...i would like to know, which techniques (brush, gaussian blur etc) you use...(i can't colour hair well :-/) :( *sigh*
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you very much.I'm glad that you love my work.
If you want to read my how to..[link]
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:iconnicodestruction:
NicoDestruction Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Oooooohhh!!! Thank you so much...you're the beeeeeeest :happybounce:
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:icongeorgewrestling:
georgewrestling Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
this pictures is great this is an old classic car with high tec right? the idea is great, as always the girls is so cute!
sure i'll fall in love with this kind of girl hahahaha thanks for sharing my friend.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
That's right.Thank you very much.
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:iconrogueangelalan:
RogueAngelAlan Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
so hawt
she needs a towel
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thanks.Yeah,she really needs it.
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:icongabbazalu:
gabbazalu Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
woah so realistic!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you.
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:icongabbazalu:
gabbazalu Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
my pleasure
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:iconcamname21:
camname21 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
I hope she doesn't ruin the seat with all that water. Is the car parked on a hill?
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
The car parked on a beach.I used this angle to make it look interesting.
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:iconcamname21:
camname21 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
I think it helped.
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:iconcreationstar:
creationstar Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
pretty.
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