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Where are you going? by ilolamai Where are you going? by ilolamai
A: Ummm, miss?
B: What?
A: Where are you going?
B: My House.
A: Dressed like that?
B: Yes. What's wrong?
A: Eh...no...Good luck.

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome.

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:iconwolfantom:
Absolutely excellent job! You've really applied the detail in a professional and very presentable way. I would have used more spectral, futuristic colours if I were to do something similar as oppose to this 90's esuqe style (this is especially with the car interior, her style of swimsuit + manual gears), but that's just me =P. I like extreme originality instead of basic my work of existing aesthetics.

Her old style car and fingerless gloves reminds me a lot of Misato Katsuragi from Neon Genesis Evangelion.

Improvements [Gosh.. if any..]:
>Her sandals/thongs (aussie slang here xD) could use a touch more well proportional work.

>The droplets are a little too prominent, it really gives the impression she's sopping wet. But this may be down to your personal choices for this work, plus judging by the title and her gloves they may as well be in a rushing, action situation.

Other than that, your ability to apply crisp original details outdo my current abilities.
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incredible work here. i must say, the coloring, lineart light effect, shading propotions & anatomy. everything is very good. and i cant see any flawes on it. well except one thing. she looks to small for the car. i mean if you look cloesly it looks like she barely can see from the front glass, or maybe this is just because the seat is pushed back too much.
anyway yeah.
vision: its pretty damn good a real EYE CANDY. from the cute girl to the car detailes. and the little TV i bet it took you a time just to draw it. and the background, well i assume its the beach , but its not very clear to see. her expression is kinda bland though

originality: well...cant really say its original but its a nice idea. wich not alot of pepole do. espacily making the car control on the right side instead of the left .

technique: i have nothing to complain on this one. i mean i never can do something as amazing as this. the lineart is very well done. the coloring is very based and is not too bright that it will hurt the eyes and the shading is PERFECT.

impact: well for me. its not really something special but i still do like it and i can look at it for a long time cuz of all the small detailes

so in overall its very good and a nice piece of art ^^
8.5 of 10
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Thank you.
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Alembic-Lynx Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Professional Photographer
yes lovely image
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Alembic-Lynx Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Professional Photographer
great work super
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Yenni-Vu Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that car interior!! *_____*
wonderful work as always! :D
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Yeah!
Thank you yenni.
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Threshie Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
P.S.: As a bit of critique, if I changed anything about this pic it would be perhaps to tint the glass in the door and window a bit so that it looks different than the sky seen through the open door. Maybe make the light source a bit more distinct if it's a super sunny day (extra shines on the edge of the open door, in her hair, etc and make the shadows a bit darker). It's still a great image even just as it is, though. It's refreshing to see an interior shot like this, because it's unusual!
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
And thanks for your critique and useful suggestion too.I will do that next time.
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Threshie Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:nod: Glad to hear it was useful!
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Threshie Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice detailed car interior shot! I really like the angle and 3D feel of the whole scene, and the girl looks lovely. My story for her is that she hopped out of a swimming pool and into her car, not caring about getting the seats wet. :giggle: I'm kind of curious if the other person talking is supposed to be in the passenger seat, though. The point of view looks like it. =)
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Thank you very much threshie.I'm glad that you like it.

Yes,that's right.Someone in the passenger seat talked to her.But it's not swimming pool,it's a beach.
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rurrumaru Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
oh its true, I saw that bit of sand between her stomach and the door after you said it.. It's a really nice Idea, thought that evreyone thinks first of a pool... well VERY GOOD JOB ^^
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