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Where are you going? by ilolamai Where are you going? by ilolamai
A: Ummm, miss?
B: What?
A: Where are you going?
B: My House.
A: Dressed like that?
B: Yes. What's wrong?
A: Eh...no...Good luck.

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome.

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:iconwolfantom:
Absolutely excellent job! You've really applied the detail in a professional and very presentable way. I would have used more spectral, futuristic colours if I were to do something similar as oppose to this 90's esuqe style (this is especially with the car interior, her style of swimsuit + manual gears), but that's just me =P. I like extreme originality instead of basic my work of existing aesthetics.

Her old style car and fingerless gloves reminds me a lot of Misato Katsuragi from Neon Genesis Evangelion.

Improvements [Gosh.. if any..]:
>Her sandals/thongs (aussie slang here xD) could use a touch more well proportional work.

>The droplets are a little too prominent, it really gives the impression she's sopping wet. But this may be down to your personal choices for this work, plus judging by the title and her gloves they may as well be in a rushing, action situation.

Other than that, your ability to apply crisp original details outdo my current abilities.
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incredible work here. i must say, the coloring, lineart light effect, shading propotions & anatomy. everything is very good. and i cant see any flawes on it. well except one thing. she looks to small for the car. i mean if you look cloesly it looks like she barely can see from the front glass, or maybe this is just because the seat is pushed back too much.
anyway yeah.
vision: its pretty damn good a real EYE CANDY. from the cute girl to the car detailes. and the little TV i bet it took you a time just to draw it. and the background, well i assume its the beach , but its not very clear to see. her expression is kinda bland though

originality: well...cant really say its original but its a nice idea. wich not alot of pepole do. espacily making the car control on the right side instead of the left .

technique: i have nothing to complain on this one. i mean i never can do something as amazing as this. the lineart is very well done. the coloring is very based and is not too bright that it will hurt the eyes and the shading is PERFECT.

impact: well for me. its not really something special but i still do like it and i can look at it for a long time cuz of all the small detailes

so in overall its very good and a nice piece of art ^^
8.5 of 10
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thanks.
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:iconchrisfoxx:
ChrisFoxx Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
And *then* I see those weren't selections, it's a conversation. Gawd, I hate when I don't have my glasses :-/
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
๊Use contact lenses instead.
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:iconchrisfoxx:
ChrisFoxx Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They don't hold enough beer :)
(gawd, I've waited 35 years to use that joke!)
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Hahaha.
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:iconchrisfoxx:
ChrisFoxx Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'm sorry, but from watching Excel Saga so many times I was looking for the selection "Put it in" :P :D
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Too bad.No selection here.
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:icond0minatus:
D0minatus Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Les siège vont en prendre un sacré coup.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Yeah,indeed.
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:iconbronybeforepony:
BronyBeforePony Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
more importantly...why did i leave?
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Eh..i don't know.
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:iconnemu-rules:
NEMU-RULES Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
i think you should try a girl on a jet sky on the water ripping the waves looking happy
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
I will consider that.Thanks for your suggestion.
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:iconjoakaha:
Joakaha Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sweet man! :D
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you.
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:icondzootzuiter:
DZootZuiter Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
I love it!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
I'm glad that you love it.
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:iconthedrummer96:
TheDrummer96 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Very Nice :D
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you.
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:iconstormfeder:
StormFedeR Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
as far as you want if it's with you babe :meow:

looks amazing! which car inspired those interiors? :)
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you very much.It's Mini cooper.
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:iconstormfeder:
StormFedeR Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
awright! :)
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:iconhazelblossom:
hazelblossom Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
you used one of your other pictures for the televison screen
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Hahaha.Yes.I'm glad that you can still remember it.
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:iconagent505:
Agent505 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Professional Writer
Maybe she just left the beach?
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
That's right.
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:iconnuqeo:
nuqeo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
i LOVE this picture! i use SAI paint tool too, but i dont know if i'll ever be that good!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you.I'm glad that you love it.
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:iconnuqeo:
nuqeo Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
no problem ^^
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:iconj9thebushmaster:
j9thebushmaster Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
Love the perspective
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
I'm glad that you love it.
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:iconelfbiter:
elfbiter Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I thought she was going to get the girl depicted on the dashboard from a train station.. :-)
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Heheh,maybe.
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:iconmega-man-king:
Mega-Man-King Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wowwee!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
^__^
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:iconmega-man-king:
Mega-Man-King Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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:iconjasichan17:
JasiChan17 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
wooooow amazing however*-*♥ love it^^
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you.I'm glad that you love it.
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:iconjasichan17:
JasiChan17 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hehe^^ welcome
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SilverTakashi Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
how does she see over the dashbored D:

still a sexy picture :D
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Hahaha.Maybe she has psychic.Thank you.
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:iconcarrot25:
carrot25 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is she a lifeguard?
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
No.She's a traveler.
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:iconpinkoprint:
PinkoPrint Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Student General Artist
Perfect as always!
:happybounce:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you.
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:iconpinkoprint:
PinkoPrint Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Student General Artist
your welcome
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:iconwolf-fang4:
Wolf-fang4 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
another good piece
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you.
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:iconquicksilver-88:
Quicksilver-88 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
This is really great!!!!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you very much.
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