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November 15, 2012
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:iconilolamai:
A: Ummm, miss?
B: What?
A: Where are you going?
B: My House.
A: Dressed like that?
B: Yes. What's wrong?
A: Eh...no...Good luck.

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome.

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:iconbocodamondo:
incredible work here. i must say, the coloring, lineart light effect, shading propotions & anatomy. everything is very good. and i cant see any flawes on it. well except one thing. she looks to small for the car. i mean if you look cloesly it looks like she barely can see from the front glass, or maybe this is just because the seat is pushed back too much.
anyway yeah.
vision: its pretty damn good a real EYE CANDY. from the cute girl to the car detailes. and the little TV i bet it took you a time just to draw it. and the background, well i assume its the beach , but its not very clear to see. her expression is kinda bland though

originality: well...cant really say its original but its a nice idea. wich not alot of pepole do. espacily making the car control on the right side instead of the left .

technique: i have nothing to complain on this one. i mean i never can do something as amazing as this. the lineart is very well done. the coloring is very based and is not too bright that it will hurt the eyes and the shading is PERFECT.

impact: well for me. its not really something special but i still do like it and i can look at it for a long time cuz of all the small detailes

so in overall its very good and a nice piece of art ^^
8.5 of 10
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:iconwolfantom:
Absolutely excellent job! You've really applied the detail in a professional and very presentable way. I would have used more spectral, futuristic colours if I were to do something similar as oppose to this 90's esuqe style (this is especially with the car interior, her style of swimsuit + manual gears), but that's just me =P. I like extreme originality instead of basic my work of existing aesthetics.

Her old style car and fingerless gloves reminds me a lot of Misato Katsuragi from Neon Genesis Evangelion.

Improvements [Gosh.. if any..]:
>Her sandals/thongs (aussie slang here xD) could use a touch more well proportional work.

>The droplets are a little too prominent, it really gives the impression she's sopping wet. But this may be down to your personal choices for this work, plus judging by the title and her gloves they may as well be in a rushing, action situation.

Other than that, your ability to apply crisp original details outdo my current abilities.
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~Riku8406 6 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
holy. freaking. crap.
that is one of the best drawings i have ever seen.
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:iconwhazizname:
*Whazizname Feb 26, 2013   General Artist
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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:iconkeiichim:
Dude, I fell in love with this photo.

I love the girl (i love redheads)
I love the car even if i dont know the model.
And I love that shes all wet, driving away.

Thank you for this.
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:icondigitalartist2013:
*DigitalArtist2013 Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
The lighting is beautiful, colors are bright and colorful and overall the image just looks great ^^
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:icon0rkanum:
Mood: Love *0rkanum Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Colors, line, and shades aawesome, the only problem with this that i see is the dashboard needs to come down.... a lot XD

still awesome though
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:iconfanartj:
love the dialogue. drawing is great too.
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:iconpegasusforever:
~pegasusforever Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol forget to change, anyone? XD
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:iconcj-db:
Mood: Love *CJ-DB Dec 19, 2012   Traditional Artist
Very pretty :love:
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Mood: Love ~SpiritoftheFirewolf Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The display of skill and detail here is impressive :3
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