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Where are you going? by ilolamai Where are you going? by ilolamai
A: Ummm, miss?
B: What?
A: Where are you going?
B: My House.
A: Dressed like that?
B: Yes. What's wrong?
A: Eh...no...Good luck.

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome.

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:iconwolfantom:
Absolutely excellent job! You've really applied the detail in a professional and very presentable way. I would have used more spectral, futuristic colours if I were to do something similar as oppose to this 90's esuqe style (this is especially with the car interior, her style of swimsuit + manual gears), but that's just me =P. I like extreme originality instead of basic my work of existing aesthetics.

Her old style car and fingerless gloves reminds me a lot of Misato Katsuragi from Neon Genesis Evangelion.

Improvements [Gosh.. if any..]:
>Her sandals/thongs (aussie slang here xD) could use a touch more well proportional work.

>The droplets are a little too prominent, it really gives the impression she's sopping wet. But this may be down to your personal choices for this work, plus judging by the title and her gloves they may as well be in a rushing, action situation.

Other than that, your ability to apply crisp original details outdo my current abilities.
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incredible work here. i must say, the coloring, lineart light effect, shading propotions & anatomy. everything is very good. and i cant see any flawes on it. well except one thing. she looks to small for the car. i mean if you look cloesly it looks like she barely can see from the front glass, or maybe this is just because the seat is pushed back too much.
anyway yeah.
vision: its pretty damn good a real EYE CANDY. from the cute girl to the car detailes. and the little TV i bet it took you a time just to draw it. and the background, well i assume its the beach , but its not very clear to see. her expression is kinda bland though

originality: well...cant really say its original but its a nice idea. wich not alot of pepole do. espacily making the car control on the right side instead of the left .

technique: i have nothing to complain on this one. i mean i never can do something as amazing as this. the lineart is very well done. the coloring is very based and is not too bright that it will hurt the eyes and the shading is PERFECT.

impact: well for me. its not really something special but i still do like it and i can look at it for a long time cuz of all the small detailes

so in overall its very good and a nice piece of art ^^
8.5 of 10
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Aprion Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i dont think its legal to drive in those slippers. I know its not where i live anyway. safety hazard.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
Yeah.I wear slippers sometimes.
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:iconthejboy88:
Thejboy88 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
If that question was asked of me, I'd say I'd like to go somewhere that has facilities for cold showers.
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:iconcharleyed:
charleyed Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
I keep coming back to your images and finding more to like.

Love
 
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
Thank you.
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MephilesTheDark2182 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
My Answer: "Oh, sorry. There's nothing wrong. It just looks like you ought to be cautious, ma'am. Anyway, again, I'm sorry. Good luck. And be careful."
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Okay.
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:iconashirokei:
AshiroKei Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
is very impressive :happybounce: Heart
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you.
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:iconriku8406:
Riku8406 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
holy. freaking. crap.
that is one of the best drawings i have ever seen.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you very much.
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:iconriku8406:
Riku8406 Featured By Owner Sep 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
your welcome
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:iconwhazizname:
Whazizname Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013   General Artist
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
^__^
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KeiichiM Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013
Dude, I fell in love with this photo.

I love the girl (i love redheads)
I love the car even if i dont know the model.
And I love that shes all wet, driving away.

Thank you for this.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
I'm glad that you love it.Thanks.
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:icondigitalartist2013:
DigitalArtist2013 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
The lighting is beautiful, colors are bright and colorful and overall the image just looks great ^^
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you very much.
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:icon0rkanum:
0rkanum Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Colors, line, and shades aawesome, the only problem with this that i see is the dashboard needs to come down.... a lot XD

still awesome though
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Hahaha.Thank you very much.
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:iconfanartj:
fanartj Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
love the dialogue. drawing is great too.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thanks.I'm glad that you love it.
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:iconpegasusforever:
pegasusforever Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol forget to change, anyone? XD
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Hahaha.
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:iconcj-db:
CJ-DB Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012   Traditional Artist
Very pretty :love:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you.
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FireheartTheInferno Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
The display of skill and detail here is impressive :3
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you very much.
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:iconkoppknakka:
KoppKnakka Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
very cool
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you.
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:iconanimamomentlover:
animamomentlover Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
thats a pretty swet looking girl :love:

B-) and that car looks like a class act.

:? is the car a more older collectible model car?
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you.

It's austin mini cooper.
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:iconanimamomentlover:
animamomentlover Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
awwwwww a classic

you are very much welcome
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:iconmakini90:
Makini90 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012   Interface Designer
This is incredible.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you.
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MisterXfile89 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
Awesome <3
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you.
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:iconteabound:
teabound Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
Wow! This is great!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you very much.
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MCMXC2 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
It's so wonderful!!!! :heart:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Thank you.
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:iconmcmxc2:
MCMXC2 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
...now I just hope that the car is stuck in the sand!XD
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:iconleviadragon99:
leviadragon99 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Well she's just back from the beach isn't she, it's not like what she's wearing is obscene or anything.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
That's right.She ran from the sea,went to the beach and jumped in the car.
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:iconleviadragon99:
leviadragon99 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
A not unreasonable way to end a day at the beach.
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:icondeepstars:
deepstars Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist
those clouds... Y THEY SO PERFECT?
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
You have to see real cloud and draw.
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Taures-15 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012
Pretty pic!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Thank you very much.
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Taures-15 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
:D
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