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Where are you going? by ilolamai Where are you going? by ilolamai
A: Ummm, miss?
B: What?
A: Where are you going?
B: My House.
A: Dressed like that?
B: Yes. What's wrong?
A: Eh...no...Good luck.

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome.

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:iconwolfantom:
Absolutely excellent job! You've really applied the detail in a professional and very presentable way. I would have used more spectral, futuristic colours if I were to do something similar as oppose to this 90's esuqe style (this is especially with the car interior, her style of swimsuit + manual gears), but that's just me =P. I like extreme originality instead of basic my work of existing aesthetics.

Her old style car and fingerless gloves reminds me a lot of Misato Katsuragi from Neon Genesis Evangelion.

Improvements [Gosh.. if any..]:
>Her sandals/thongs (aussie slang here xD) could use a touch more well proportional work.

>The droplets are a little too prominent, it really gives the impression she's sopping wet. But this may be down to your personal choices for this work, plus judging by the title and her gloves they may as well be in a rushing, action situation.

Other than that, your ability to apply crisp original details outdo my current abilities.
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incredible work here. i must say, the coloring, lineart light effect, shading propotions & anatomy. everything is very good. and i cant see any flawes on it. well except one thing. she looks to small for the car. i mean if you look cloesly it looks like she barely can see from the front glass, or maybe this is just because the seat is pushed back too much.
anyway yeah.
vision: its pretty damn good a real EYE CANDY. from the cute girl to the car detailes. and the little TV i bet it took you a time just to draw it. and the background, well i assume its the beach , but its not very clear to see. her expression is kinda bland though

originality: well...cant really say its original but its a nice idea. wich not alot of pepole do. espacily making the car control on the right side instead of the left .

technique: i have nothing to complain on this one. i mean i never can do something as amazing as this. the lineart is very well done. the coloring is very based and is not too bright that it will hurt the eyes and the shading is PERFECT.

impact: well for me. its not really something special but i still do like it and i can look at it for a long time cuz of all the small detailes

so in overall its very good and a nice piece of art ^^
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Aprion Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
i dont think its legal to drive in those slippers. I know its not where i live anyway. safety hazard.
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
Yeah.I wear slippers sometimes.
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Thejboy88 Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2013
If that question was asked of me, I'd say I'd like to go somewhere that has facilities for cold showers.
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charleyed Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
I keep coming back to your images and finding more to like.

Love
 
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
Thank you.
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MephilesTheDark2182 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
My Answer: "Oh, sorry. There's nothing wrong. It just looks like you ought to be cautious, ma'am. Anyway, again, I'm sorry. Good luck. And be careful."
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Okay.
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AshiroKei Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
is very impressive :happybounce: Heart
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you.
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Riku8406 Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
holy. freaking. crap.
that is one of the best drawings i have ever seen.
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