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Swing over water.

Program: SAI Paint Tool

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:iconfairytailforever123:
This is absolutely magneficent! You can see very clear movement in the picture, and rendering sucj as all the little water dropplets are stunning. The girl looks really cute. All the creases in her dress are perfectly placed, like they would be on reclothing, and the shading on eveything in this piece is really incredible. I love the way the water looks. It looks exactly like a real rushing stream or river. Oh and the hands and feet! You are very talented in human anatomy as well. The background has a lovely evergreen shade, and it's the perfect colour and makes the person who sees it feel like they're in a jungle or forest with that girl.
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It could just be me, but while I can see where you've worked on showing the movement of her hair and clothes on the swing, for some reason it looks like they're swinging forward while the swing itself is going backward. I'd suggest working on the effects of motion in your work, because this isn't the first time I've noticed it. While you art is beautiful and full of colour and detail, there just isn't much life to it. Even when drawing people, they still just look like still life and blend in with the backgrounds a little too much.

I also like how you've created the water being splashed up by her toes; your ability at drawing such cute feet is what drew me to your gallery (being a foot fetishist; lol).
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AmateurMangakaDandG Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Really love this work! So innocent. Your art is something I always check to see if there's anything new. Just love what you create and the emotion I feel as I look at this particular piece is one of peaceful happiness. Just might have to take this one home with me in a print. I'm addicted. Critiques are always good to have...but I thought the hair looked like it was in the exact right place, the hair on the top of the head/face, as it's thrown forward, not backwards. Only if the wind would have been coming from the front would the hair (bangs) need to be blown back, and then of course the rest of her hair would be going the wrong direction. My humble opinion is that it's perfect the way it is and completely in the right place based on the action of the girl on the swing. Go with your gut!
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Gumsters Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's beautiful! Great job!
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CreeppingDeath Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
gorgeous artwork, i love it
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
Thank you.I'm glad that you love it.
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Sing-Down-The-Moon Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student General Artist
This is really cute!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you very much.
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GoodOldBaz Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
she is very, very cute and quite pretty!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you very much.
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Whazizname Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013   General Artist
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
^__^
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animamomentlover Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
that looks like fun :w00t:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Yeah!
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:iconanimamomentlover:
animamomentlover Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I just want to dive into the screen and help her push :D
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:iconinkdweller:
inkdweller Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww, the colors here are my favorite part. o w o
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you.
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matthew1926 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
this is my favorite out of all your artwork. keep it goin.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
I'm glad to know that.I will keep going.
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:iconcj-db:
CJ-DB Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012   Traditional Artist
She's very pretty and cute! :love:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you.
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:iconashkanie:
Ashkanie Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i like
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
I'm glad that you like it.
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m-designer-m Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2012  Professional
super !
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2012
Thanks.
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teturo Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012
:icondragonwant: Incredibly adorable expression, and beautiful scene ^_^
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Thanks teturo.
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teturo Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
My pleasure ^_^
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deepstars Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist
beautiful! but i can't help noticing that the placement of the eyes makes the face seem flat...? or maybe it's just me lolz!
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2012
Thank you.
I see.Thanks for your critique too.
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deviatedone Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Student General Artist
Hmm.... It's not as intricate/busy as some of the other pieces I've seen in your gallery. And while that can be a design element in and of itself, I just don't feel it here. I do like what you've done with the foliage, that I can say works well. Although the texture at the bottom doesn't read as "water" in my head. And the pose seems a little bit static to me. Maybe if the ropes had a little twist, and her angle turned a little bit more toward us as result, with the left leg bent in a little more so you get a dynamic kick-and-twist. It's great though that you added a splash of water there to let us infer this IS water and there IS motion. I don't know if you agree, I just thought I'd throw in my two cents.
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Thank you very much for your critique.I agree with you.I am not satisfied with this picture.I use it for testing my coloring technique and i think i will do it better in my next work.
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akirakai Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
beautiful :wow:
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
Thank you.
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:iconakirakai:
akirakai Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you are welcome
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mizz-izzy Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012
cute! and nice job on capturing the gentle sway from the swinging
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
Thank you.
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:iconjoakaha:
Joakaha Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sweet! ^^
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
Thanks.
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Megamean09 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012
CUUUUUUUUUUUUTE! >~< AND cute feet splashing!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
Thank you very much.
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:iconkeyso-and-the-fringe:
keyso-and-the-fringe Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i need to go on holiday actually now that i think about it!
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
Heheh.That's great.
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Skogsjones Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Beautiful ^^ (hole pic together)
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
Thank you.
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danielsrzg Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
u r rly fast with ur arts >_>.....
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
It's because i have more free time now.
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danielsrzg Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh....how?
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
I'm less busy with my work.Everything is in order,so i have time to draw what i want.
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danielsrzg Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
oh cool :D
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Artemisumi Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
อยากได้คนช่วยแกว่งไหมคับ
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012
ถ้ายอมลุยน้ำลงไปล่ะก็นะ
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