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Swing by ilolamai Swing by ilolamai
Swing over water.

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome.

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This is absolutely magneficent! You can see very clear movement in the picture, and rendering sucj as all the little water dropplets are stunning. The girl looks really cute. All the creases in her dress are perfectly placed, like they would be on reclothing, and the shading on eveything in this piece is really incredible. I love the way the water looks. It looks exactly like a real rushing stream or river. Oh and the hands and feet! You are very talented in human anatomy as well. The background has a lovely evergreen shade, and it's the perfect colour and makes the person who sees it feel like they're in a jungle or forest with that girl.
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It could just be me, but while I can see where you've worked on showing the movement of her hair and clothes on the swing, for some reason it looks like they're swinging forward while the swing itself is going backward. I'd suggest working on the effects of motion in your work, because this isn't the first time I've noticed it. While you art is beautiful and full of colour and detail, there just isn't much life to it. Even when drawing people, they still just look like still life and blend in with the backgrounds a little too much.

I also like how you've created the water being splashed up by her toes; your ability at drawing such cute feet is what drew me to your gallery (being a foot fetishist; lol).
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AmateurMangakaDandG Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Really love this work! So innocent. Your art is something I always check to see if there's anything new. Just love what you create and the emotion I feel as I look at this particular piece is one of peaceful happiness. Just might have to take this one home with me in a print. I'm addicted. Critiques are always good to have...but I thought the hair looked like it was in the exact right place, the hair on the top of the head/face, as it's thrown forward, not backwards. Only if the wind would have been coming from the front would the hair (bangs) need to be blown back, and then of course the rest of her hair would be going the wrong direction. My humble opinion is that it's perfect the way it is and completely in the right place based on the action of the girl on the swing. Go with your gut!
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Gumsters Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's beautiful! Great job!
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CreeppingDeath Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2013  Student Digital Artist
gorgeous artwork, i love it
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
Thank you.I'm glad that you love it.
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Sing-Down-The-Moon Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2013  Student General Artist
This is really cute!
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you very much.
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GoodOldBaz Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
she is very, very cute and quite pretty!
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you very much.
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Whazizname Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013   General Artist
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
^__^
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