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It's a cleaning day.

Program: SAI Paint Tool

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Critique by ~Candycloud-bookworm Nov 30, 2012, 10:06:51 AM
My second critique!
Yet again you have produced a great piece of artwork!
An interesting scene idea, very original (yay! Full marks for that, then!).
What I think I like most is the fact all of the girls have different costumes, each done with care.
Amazing background, as usual!!!
There's a couple of things I think you should consider changing:
The girl sitting on the edge of the panels - her hat is unnaturally placed (unless its windy, which I don't think it is...)
Everything up close is very clear and bright apart from the bottles in the cardboard box, which are slightly blurred (but only slightly!)

BUt anyway, a really nice piece, upload more soon!
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Critique by *Onii-chan93 Nov 28, 2012, 10:24:51 PM
Alright Let's begin the critique!

First things first, This is a very good piece of work the detail is done very well from the hair to the background. The shading is pretty much flawless. I know from experience that getting the shadows on everything is very difficult. Mostly because of where everything is and all the angles.

The colors are very vibrant and I was really impressed who much detail you still where able to do even for the girls on the opposite end of the solar panel. Especially the people sitting on the bench.

All and all, This was wonderfully done and I applaud your excellent work.
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~marikadaa May 4, 2013  New member
cool, so much people!^^
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*GenesisStar20 May 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cool.
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~MUSHIboyHANN Mar 24, 2013
2 point perspective the one on the left hand side the vanish point appealing, if your do horizontal flip, multiply times and oh hold to spam the horizontal flip, you might notice the a little weird the back ground perspective but hey good job bro
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~MUSHIboyHANN Mar 24, 2013
2 point perspective the one on the left hand side the vanish point "less" appealing , left out the word
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~Vic-Soh Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey, dude! Long time no see!
I'm sorry to say this, you can hate me after this but I remember your drawings when I first saw them years ago and now looking at these... well, I just feel that your skills are kinda stagnated.
In other words, they look the same. The lineart is almost impeccable but your coloring skills look almost just like 5+ years ago.
In my opinion, I think you should looks at other better drawings and try to improve and polish your skills more.
You really should go to Pixiv ([link]) and look at the "daily ranking" for some jaw-dropping stuff made by pros from Japan and other places. (there's an English version too at the bottom of the page, btw)
You could also try [link] (full of hentai so watch out) they have some cools drawings too (I even saw your drawings there too)
If you ask me where you should improve, I'd say mainly the hair (lineart and coloring) also the shading too (though that's your style but it could use some polishing).
Lately, I've been busy with my job (I make backgrounds for cellphone games) so I haven't drawn characters in a while so I can't say my stuff is better than yours (if ever lol) so I don't think I have the right to tell you all of that stuff, but I'd appreciate if you took it in consideration.
By the way, that brown box's perspective is a bit off... hehe.
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*Filanwizard Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
its the green version of car wash day.
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*Whazizname Feb 26, 2013   General Artist
:)
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*RedWingsDragon Feb 22, 2013
Awesome work here
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Mood: Wow! *HeraldOfFire Feb 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I only wish the bikini brigade would come and clean my solar panels some day. Though, I suppose it might help if I actually owned solar panels to begin with. It's hard to find fault with such masterful work. You've obviously honed your talent over a long period of time, and it really shows in the quality of your art.
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~GodsOnVacation Jan 10, 2013
there hair is especially wonderful.
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