I feel like with every piece of art I haven't critiqued you've shown an astounding effort to improve, and you really have. This is immensely immersive, and the mood and vibe I receive from it just makes me feel warm and joyful. The clouds are well arranged, and well rendered, and I can tell you've done masterful work trying to create naturalistic cumuli. Also, you've taken great consideration to show the direction of light by causing blue variation in the sky, and distribution of light across the sides of buildings. The wood panels and hair texture on the female character have just absolutely amazed me, with so many high lights, shadows, and texturing, it looks even more like real hair, and because of your already masterful work with light and values, I really get the sense of soft silky cloth from her outer wear. A few key points though: It would be nice to have some more buildings off in the distance have a little more conveyance of light on the surface like the ones closer to us, and the metal bengals the character has on could be more effective if you increased contrast and highlights/ made them shinier, and the musical instrument to the right feels as though its almost just floating when looking at it the bottom of it touching the floor. Thats all! Thank you so much for putting your effort and time into this to share it with us ilolamai! This piece is beautiful
to design something generally knew, you have to start again, and i think with great intent you disconnect with the past, the look of this piece is absolutely stunning, the colours really do compliment each other and yet again you used so many, to balance the colours with such understanding would take a lot of practice, the one thing that really strikes my eyes in this picture is the way you used the fish eye camera effect, it really does stand out, colouring and shading is remarkably amazing, the character it self is stunning and cute, also body is in the right perspective and nicely foreshortened down with the feet and toes, out of ten i would give this a 10/10 for such an original piece. ^_^ good work keep it up!!
Your art is posted on [link] I was wondering if you endorsed this post? I can't tell because all the comments are in Thai, but once I saw your work I immediately recognised it. I hope they're not stealing... but if they are, I just wanted to give you a heads up.
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