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To send or not to send.A little fight between angels and demons.

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome(thank you anonymous for giving me 3 months membership)

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

Ah, what a busy picture we have here! ouo There's a heaps lot of stuff going on there, but despite that there's so many little angels and demons all over the place, it doesn't feel overcrowded. Most excellent. c:

I'm not gonna get into a detailed overview of every single side-character's anatomy, there's no use. xD; We can see that they don't have that much detail because you didn't intend to, as with the picture's size it would get lost anyways. Now, this has a good and bad side; there's plenty of space for more effort to be put, but then again, by most people this effort would go unseen. Besides, I think that at the current picture size, the amount of details on the little angels and demons is good enough. ouob You compensated anatomy details with all sorts of cute and funny activities. Nice!

I noticed a couple of flaws in the anatomy of the main girl though. owo One is on her left hand; the area under her little finger is too big. Too round.
Another is her right knee, which is positioned too much to the right (our right). The right foot is in a different angle than her right leg, but I think the leg is turned wrong, not the foot. Yeah. The foot's all right, just the leg is turned too much to the right (our right).
It appears to me that her mouth is slightly too high, as it's a little too far from the chin.

Once again you tested your skills at perspectives and regular geometrical shapes, I see. owo Well, what can I say, the straight lines here aren't done as well as they are in the light ball golf picture. They're more wavy here, which although isn't a great flaw, it's still noticeable, especially on the floor.
Speaking of the floor, it's turned too much towards the viewer. This is mostly noticeable in the lower right corner - see the angel and demon there? Yeah, their perspective doesn't mat the perspective of the floor. The floor is titled too much to the lower right compared to the rest of the picture.

So, as closing words I wanna say that I really like the idea. I'm sure I saw similar ideas already, but it's not the same. It has a dose of originality. owo I've seen better executions of your ideas though, with all due respect. However, I still wish you good luck on your glorious journey of improvement. I hope I helped somewhat. .w.
If I sounded too harsh in my critique, I apologize. I didn't intend to. .w. But if anything's unclear, let me know. I'll do my best to fix it. ouob