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Gunslinger maid by ilolamai Gunslinger maid by ilolamai
Guns : Beretta 92FS.Same model as Revy(Black lagoon) 's gun .I used it as reference.

Program: Line art and Coloring with SAI Paint Tool,textures and effect with Photoshop CS3

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I would say you definitely displayed what you were trying to achieve here greatly. There is no question about what you were trying to do at all.

As far as originality goes, I'd say it is pretty original you do not see this type of thing very often, but the gun may be too close to it's reference in similarity.

You're technique is great but I must say more contrast of lights and shadow would be helpful with the depth. Also the fingers do look somewhat odd, the pinky fingers anyway. The other fingers are fine. Simply shade a bit harder next time, and put some slightly more harsh highlights.

Overall this piece is exceptional, the depth is the only real flaw here. If you were to do as I said earlier, and maybe get a little more contrast in this, it would work better.
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fanartj Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
Definitely do not complain about your tea to her! ;-)
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
Indeed!
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Complete-Vileness85 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013
Now THATS a maid u DON'T Wanna Mess With.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Hahaha.Indeed.
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Calleahan Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
Are you sure this from "Gunslinger Girl", and not from "Black Lagoon"...? :pissedoff:
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Calleahan Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
Are you sure this is from Gunslinger Girl, and not from Blac Lagoon...? :pissedoff:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012
Not both.Just the same idea.
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Calleahan Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2012
yup, i like it, and tns for answer me :)
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StarTrekQPLZ Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012
Wow, if her and Sakuya were have a battle, I wonder who would win? Infinite Knives or 2 Guns? 0w0
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012
I think gun can beat knife.
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StarTrekQPLZ Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2012
But Sakuya can stop time and make a cloud of a hundred knives fly at her target at the same second. :D
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012
Oooh!That's so scary!100 flying knives!
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SeaofFallingStars Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
Umm, I can't do a critique (no Premium Membership) but I can still make a detailed comment.

Well, first thing that comes to mind is that her skirt is VERY poofy, almost like a Princess' dress. That's a bit much in my opinion, but I will defer to you for reasoning. The wavy folds are very well done, and I can see them in motion as she whips out them pistols.

The guns and hands are very nice, and I can see her having very sensitive hands for cleaning delicate objects. The guns have nice detail, though I'm fairly sure they normally have some more color on them. Whatever works. The glasses are a tad silly, but seem to be put to where she can look more closely at something while cleaning or inspecting it. Nice touch there. Not sure what the headgear is for.

Also, the P.O.V. of the art gives to mind that whoever she is whipping out her guns to shoot is parkouring over something, hence the angle. Also, she seems to be a bit happy for being ready to kill someone. Sociopath much?

Hope that helps.
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2012
Thanks for your critique,compliment and suggestion.You can write your critique anywhere,i will read it.

Hahaha.She just wants to warn someone not to come near her,i think.
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SeaofFallingStars Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2011
My Family likes this art, not just me.

I'll see if I can whip up a critique.
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011
Wow!I'm glad to know that.Thank you^^
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SeaofFallingStars Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011
Art of win.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011
Yeah!
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Jan-Itor-19 Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2011
OMG °D° SHE'S ROBERTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MAGNIFIQUE!!!!!!!!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011
Hahaha.Roberta is not only one glasses maid.Thank you^^
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CaptainPrower Featured By Owner May 29, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
damn.....remind me not to piss her off.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner May 31, 2011
Yeah!
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CaptainPrower Featured By Owner May 31, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
is she like an undercover cop?
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2011
No,just a maid with gun.
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Millenium110 Featured By Owner May 18, 2011
The guns seem a bit too big for her hands. Plus... Where would she hide them? A discrete 9 Millimeter or a USP .45 would fit better than those beasts. Hm... Now that I think about it... She looks too tech savvy to rely on sheer stopping power. Maybe a machine pistol? Something like those G18s from Call of Duty: Modern Warfare 2. Here is one you might like: [link]

Sorry, I'm kind of a stickler for detail when it comes to guns. I know one thing for certain. Long barrel, high caliber, pistols like those are heavy. Keep that in mind. If you have a petite character, they definately won't be lugging around Desert Eagles or Magnums... or Beretta 92FS's. Too much extra weight. Plus, the recoil on those things would cause massive wrist damage if fired improperly. There are plenty of small guns yet lethal guns out there. Explore those options, instead of just going for the Big Guns.
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ilolamai Featured By Owner May 21, 2011
Wow!You're gun expert.I really don't know that,just draw as i want.Thanks for your in formation.I will remember that.
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Millenium110 Featured By Owner May 22, 2011
And you draw well ^_^ I'm no expert. I just met some of them. Very informative conversations.
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Blufire1992 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2011  Student Writer
Best. Idea. Ever...
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
Thanks^^
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bigbrown56 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
maids with guns, always ready to protect master
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2010
Yes,that's right.
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:icondeadcobra:
DeadCobra Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2010
Fun maid =)
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2010
Heheheh.
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yuzi-13 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010   Writer
Omg luv it
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010
Thanks^^
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yuzi-13 Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2010   Writer
ur so talented
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deviansPoPtart Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010
Kick yo butt maid powahs D:<
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010
Shoot'em all!!
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deviansPoPtart Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2010
Oh yes!! D:<!!
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CJ-DB Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010   Traditional Artist
Nice job! :D The household is likely to be perforated everywhere. :lol:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010
Yeah!And she has to repair it.
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CJ-DB Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2010   Traditional Artist
:XD:
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TigerNightHawk Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2010
Great angle on this picture I love how the maid dress is really flowing.
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
Thank you very much^^
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TigerNightHawk Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
welcome.
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thornsandrosies Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010
very nice job, i must applaud ^^
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010
Thank you^^
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:iconthornsandrosies:
thornsandrosies Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010
welcome! ^^
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temuca Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2010
WOW! It´s great
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2010
Thank you^^
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