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Evening by ilolamai Evening by ilolamai
I saw a photo on facebook.The model has posed like this.And i felt like i have to draw it.

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome.

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:iconyezzzsir:
Nice painting. As for things that stand out to me, the lighting you seem to have chosen is coming from behind (setting sun I imagine?) but some parts of her do not seem to reflect (pardon the pun) this ie: her breasts, her right arm ( and lower parts of the arms which should be shielded by the wall behind), her right leg, and possibly her left ear and face section which should be shielded by her hair somewhat. You spent time rendering the fence behind but the wall looks half finished which kinda lets down the rest of the detailed work you did there.

Back on the lighting issue you chose a great time of the day for the piece and it would have been nice to use reflected lighting on her to tie her in better with the background you have used.

I actually like the pose, makes me think this is a snap shot of a scene & wonder what is actually going through her mind rather than thinking she is just "posing for the camera"

Great effort & look forward to seeing more from you.
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:iconfatenano:
fatenano Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
nice
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:iconfanartj:
fanartj Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
Sweet!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
Thanks.
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:iconredwingsdragon:
RedWingsDragon Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
Awesome work here
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Thank you red.
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:iconwhazizname:
Whazizname Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013   General Artist
:thumbsup: :thumbsup:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
^__^
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:iconthemangacritic:
themangacritic Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like the composition of the piece, but it's mostly the lighting I have some problems with. Since the source of light is the sun, the light shouldn't be so white on certain places like the skin. I would add a little splash of orange and yellow to make it pop more. Overall, I do like the piece. :)
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
I see.Thanks for your critique and suggestion,i will remember that.

I'm sorry for my late reply.
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:iconcj-db:
CJ-DB Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012   Traditional Artist
Very pretty your drawing :love:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you.
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:iconmizz-izzy:
mizz-izzy Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
nice job on the pose!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Thank you very much.
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:iconmatthew1926:
matthew1926 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2012
idk what girls just naturally does this but nice work lol.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Hahaha.Thank you.
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:iconyezzzsir:
yezzzsir Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
Nice painting. As for things that stand out to me, the lighting you seem to have chosen is coming from behind (setting sun I imagine?) but some parts of her do not seem to reflect (pardon the pun) this ie: her breasts, her right arm ( and lower parts of the arms which should be shielded by the wall behind), her right leg, and possibly her left ear and face section which should be shielded by her hair somewhat. You spent time rendering the fence behind but the wall looks half finished which kinda lets down the rest of the detailed work you did there.

Back on the lighting issue you chose a great time of the day for the piece and it would have been nice to use reflected lighting on her to tie her in better with the background you have used.

I actually like the pose, makes me think this is a snap shot of a scene & wonder what is actually going through her mind rather than thinking she is just "posing for the camera"

Great effort & look forward to seeing more from you.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you very much for your critique.I already read it from critique box.
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:iconyezzzsir:
yezzzsir Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2012
Sorry bout that. Got to the end of it before I realised it was in the wrong place lol. I hope it helps. I know I've improved a lot with others pointing things out like these to me so if I can help others I'm only too happy to. Feel free to give me a shout if you feel I can & I'm looking forward to more great work from you.
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:iconmohamedhp:
Mohamedhp Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Sweet :P
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you.
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:iconshiroune:
Shiroune Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
my only issue with this image is that there seems to be too much wrinkles on the boobs. Everything else is really well done.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
I see.Thank you.
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:iconcindysart:
CindysArt Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Wonderful work! :clap:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thanks dezzan.
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:iconnonashu:
Nonashu Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think that draws more attention then takes away from it.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012
Heheh.Thank you.
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:icongeno-bahamut:
Geno-Bahamut Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2012
Interesting pose. Would give the person an unusual personality if they posed like that normally, lol.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Thank you very much.Hahaha,indeed.
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:iconsigillumdeiaemeth:
SigillumDeiAemeth Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Is she peeing or something? lol She looks sexy though!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Hahaha.Thank you.
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:icongeorgewrestling:
georgewrestling Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
WOW this girl is very sexy.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Thank you very much.
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:iconsethbramwell:
sethbramwell Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
Very sexy as always!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Thank you.
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:iconjoakaha:
Joakaha Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Sweet! :)
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Thanks.
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:icondaughterofaeris:
DaughterOfAeris Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012   Traditional Artist
lol looks like its right out of a hentai, looks good ^ ^
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Hahaha.Thanks.
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:iconmetalrodent:
Metalrodent Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012
great work, the detail you put in your work is stunning
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Thank you very much.
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:icontheanimaster:
TheAnimaster Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Darn Facebook. I have the same problems : P Now the irritating thing is getting rid of those 'suggestions' once you're finished with them XD
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
I hate facebook.Everyone will know when i click "like" on some sexy photos.So save it in HDD and go.
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:iconstartrekqplz:
StarTrekQPLZ Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Ribbit?
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Ribbit?

What's that?
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:iconstartrekqplz:
StarTrekQPLZ Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Frog.
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:iconbluemallo:
bluemallo Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012   Digital Artist
กระโปรงเกะกะจัง //ผิด :iconmegustabishieplz:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
เง้อ...
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:iconteturo:
teturo Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Looks like she is shy ^_~

Beautiful shading :meow:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Hahaha.Thank you teturo.
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:iconteturo:
teturo Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
My pleasure :meow:
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