I think this picture is just lovely, the background is very well detailed, I love the laptop, the key's and the screen...is that DA I see? I think the smoothness around the ankles and fingers could use a little work. You're artwork is always beautiful though and I'm happy I'm watching you. (No creeper vibe intended ) Your characters are very cute and I can see they possess their own personalities. The shading is very impressive, it's even and you can always tell where the light is coming from which is crucial. You mastered that well and I love your art. Can't wait for more.
I like your original take on this meme. I haven't seen anything like it before. Making the 'before' picture bigger (so that we can see your improvement) would improve this but it is clear enough at full size.