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Commission:For vampyou.com by ilolamai Commission:For vampyou.com by ilolamai
First commission for vampyou.com [link]
Glasses schoolgirl character.

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome.

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Commission closed.Open again 15 october 2011.
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:iconchilingo:
This is my first time writing a critique but this is what i think about the picture. the lines are beautiful and the colors you chose fits perfectly in to the picture. The scene and perspective is very good and the road looks really long. But even if you was gonna blur the tree and the leaves out, you could have added a bit more details. And one small thing that disturbs me is that her hair in front of her eyes, it just get cut like a straight line. It would look better if you made it look like every other hair straws on the picture .

Otherwise I love the picture :)
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:iconsigillumdeiaemeth:
SigillumDeiAemeth Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
I wanna sex her.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Oh!
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:icondante8411:
Dante8411 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2012
I'd like to see what she looks like now, as a vampire.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2012
You have to visit the website.
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:iconmasamuneyuuki:
MasamuneYuuki Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Amazing. It's like one of those dating games or something like that when you try to win over someone
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011
Thank you very much^^
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:iconskysammi1:
skysammi1 Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2011
beauutiful
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2011
Thank you^^
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:iconfierceflash:
FierceFlash Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Great drawing! SO cute! I looovvee your style!! :la: GJ!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011
Thank you.I'm glad that you love my work^^
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:iconfierceflash:
FierceFlash Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome! Keep up the good work! c;
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:iconsuihara:
Suihara Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2011  Student Digital Artist
just so beautiful
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011
Thank you^^
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:iconlyn-lopez:
Lyn-Lopez Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2011  Student Digital Artist
so sexy and beuty!!!!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011
Thank you^^
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:iconhypersonic53:
Hypersonic53 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Looks great! :D
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011
Thank you^^
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:iconhypersonic53:
Hypersonic53 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No prob! :D
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:iconbrassman9:
BrassMan9 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
Much the same set of comments as chillingo with the addition that if the trees and leaves are going to be blurred, the so should the buildings, but only one got the blur treatment. I don't know Sai all that well, but if you were working in layers, a perspective blur (setting perspective lines, then increasing the blur as the perspective recedes) might help. Other than that, it's a very good piece.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2011
I see.Thanks for your suggestion.I have to use Photoshop to do that.SAI has blur tool but it doesn't work as good as Photoshop blur filter.
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:iconcdefender-robokid:
CDefender-RoboKid Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautifully done ^______^

The scenery and colors are so beautiful and soft *W*
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
Thank you very much^^
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:iconcdefender-robokid:
CDefender-RoboKid Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Anytime ^_____^
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:iconvyllains:
Vyllains Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
gross long time not see your work seem different then ussual...I love it..i saw that the hair looks very well blend.. :icongreatjobplz:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
Yeah,i adjusted my style.I'm glad that you love it^^
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:iconxmoondark:
xmoondark Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2011
It keep getting better and better
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
Thank you^^
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:iconann2333:
Ann2333 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2011
I love it
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
I'm glad that you love it^^
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:iconann2333:
Ann2333 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
giggle
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:iconcarrot25:
carrot25 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG, she is cute!!! Meganekko forever!!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
Thank you.Yeah!
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:iconjhikaru:
JHikaru Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
another great artwork, nicely done ! :]
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
Thank you^^
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:iconcj-db:
CJ-DB Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011   Traditional Artist
Great job and very pretty :love:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
Thank you cjdb^^
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:iconxanegoh:
Xanegoh Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011  Student Writer
MEGANE!!! great work as always
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
Yeah!Thank you^^
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:iconxanegoh:
Xanegoh Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Student Writer
NP :D
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:iconwolfsgore:
WolfsGore Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
awww :3 so cute
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
Thank you^^
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:icononlya-cg-admirer:
onlyA-CG-admiReR Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011
:love::love::love:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
^__^
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:iconjoakaha:
Joakaha Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:)
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
^__^
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:icontifa-bells:
tifa-bells Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011
wow this is so cute!!! great job as always :)
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
Thank you very much^^
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:iconheddsa:
heddsa Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
Your drawing is as awsome as always ^^
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2011
Thank you very much^^
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:iconheddsa:
heddsa Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011
You are very welcome ^^
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