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However, I do have some unsettling feeling about this picture. I think it's the detachment between the subject and the background. First of all, the clouds, while giving it a blur to simulate depth of field, should, IMO, be sharp. It feels like the clouds are from a different image photoshopped in. There is a detachment between that and the cityscape. The cityscape itself feels detached from the subject. I think it's the shading technique used. The subject uses a mixture of hard and soft shading while the buildings use mainly soft gradient shading. The trees, however, look superb, and if you can give the buildings texture, I think it will improve it. That also goes for the foreground, the floor on the balcony(?) needs a bit of texture.
Overall, it's a very impactful piece with great vision and originality.
(Just my 2 cents. I'm not at your level yet, but I think that's what I would do if I were to do this. Keep up the good work!)
First of all, I really like how you drew the girl in the background with the clothing that she's wearing, including the orange skirt and the detailing surrounding her cloth.
I also like how you drew her hair flowing down her body as well. The posing on the character, including her anatomy came out wonderful too. I also like how you did the railings that she's holding also.
As for the city surrounding her. You worked really hard on how you drew the buildings (including the detailing of the skyscrapers and the houses) surrounding her.
Lastly, you worked pretty hard on how you did the shading of the sky and the clouds surrounding her. I even like how you did the shading and colouring surrounding her.
How long did it take for you to do this illustration and did you run into any problems doing the illustration?
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