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Blue sky by ilolamai Blue sky by ilolamai
Just a girl,city and sky.

Program: SAI Paint Tool

Any critique is welcome.

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:iconmagicalmadoka:
First of all, i really love how the girl goes well with the background. I can tell that she is enjoying the view of the city/ town. You did really well with the background since it looks lifelike and it gives you this city like feeling. And you really did well with the setting on how the houses and the buildings are all three dimensional if look though it in perspective. The only problem is that the background pays much impact and attention than the girl which is just the only slight problem. All in all everything is good~! :) Hope this critique helped you. It's ok if you disagree on some points.
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Critique by Catnipkitty99 Nov 22, 2012, 10:12:19 AM
The background is AMAZING! Its just so detailed and everything has perfect porportions. As for the girl she doesnt stand out of the picture, she fits right in(i mean that in a good way). Also the shading is absoulutly perfect! All in all the every bit of the peice really comliments each other(uhhhhh does that make sense?). I can only whish to be as good as you in paint tool sai, only because I just got is the other day, but just by looking at this I wonder how does somone make spmething so impressive? You must spend hours on your peices, and they are all beautiful and amazing, someday I whish to be as great of a digital artist as yourself.
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Broham2164 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2015
“There’s always a lighthouse.  There’s always a man.  There’s always a city,”  this is in no way related. I just thought of it when reading the description.
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trixelina Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awesome
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014
Thank you.
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:iconbananashroom:
bananashroom Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014  Student General Artist
Gorgeous, especially that background... So much detail Tl - lT ....
may I ask how long this picture took you?
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014
Thank you very much.
Around 2-3 days.
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MephilesTheDark2182 Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Just to be honest, I'm always impressed with how detailed things like city buildings and other urban structures are when they're drawn anime style. It gives me a good feeling knowing that there's somebody who can do building better than me.
(Seriously, I SUCK at drawing buildings, unless I use a ruler.)

Nice work!!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
I see.Thank you.
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:iconwhite-rose-brian:
White-Rose-Brian Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Impressive!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2013
Thank you.
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:icontheaimandps:
THEAIMANDPS Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
REALLY AMAZING!!! i always love your drawings! they inspire me alot!!! hope to see more of them ^^
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you.I'm glad that you love it.
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THEAIMANDPS Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you`re welcome :)
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blackearsbunny Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
oh my goodness!! how do you do this!!!!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
I just drew it.
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:iconanimefreak117:
AnimeFreak117 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
real good
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you.
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super-illustrator0 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
You made a pretty important mistake...
that people generally don't care about.
And that's the shadows. They go in different directions, and their intensities are different. Seeing as you have 5k views, and a decent fav : view ratio...
I doubt you have to make this change.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Yeah,you're right.Thanks for your critique.I still have to practice and learn more.

Sorry for my late reply.
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matthew1926 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
i love this piece for 2 reasons. 1:i love redheads 2:its fucking gorgeous!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
I'm glad that you love it matthew.
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:iconanimefanhentai:
AnimeFanHentai Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2012
Very beauty!!
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you.
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:iconcj-db:
CJ-DB Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012   Traditional Artist
Awesome and very pretty :love:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you.
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Yuko-Rann Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2012
The girl is so cute and beautiful, but more than that I wanna mention it's awesome and amazing of the background, especially the detailed buildings! I wonder how you could make that ^^ Is this the actual landscape? :)
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you yuko.Sorry for my late reply.Yes,this is the actual landscape.
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animamomentlover Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
now that is a wonderful point of view

the background is wonderfully detailed and i feel as if the clouds can come alive.
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you very much for your compliment.
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:iconanimamomentlover:
animamomentlover Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:pat: you are very much welcome
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Gregin-Mjolnir Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2012
very nice :D
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you.
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lordsafi Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012
beautiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii FULL :)
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you very much.
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:iconlordsafi:
lordsafi Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
pleasures all mine mam :)

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:iconmakini90:
Makini90 Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012   Interface Designer
The detail on this illustration is simply incredible.
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you makini.
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:iconlenlenbell:
LenLenbell Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awesome :la:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you len.
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LenLenbell Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2013  Student Digital Artist
you are welcome Bro
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camname21 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012
Great expression and pose. I really like that you use the railing for more then a prop.
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you.I'm glad that you like it.
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Angemin Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student General Artist
in general the perspective is quite perfect... the colors, tones and shades look great too, the design of the character is not my style yet it looks amazing too.

the background could use a little work, maybe a little bit of texture and details like lights and reflections... it makes it heavier and tiresome to do because your background is already pretty detailed yet it will make it more "believable"
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Thank you very much for your compliment and suggestion.I will try to do that.

Sorry for my late reply.I just saw your comment.It's not in my message box.
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:iconangemin:
Angemin Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2013  Student General Artist
No worries... it is nice to know you appreciate any comments I could give you... it is always good to support each other in this tough competitive artistic world.
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Wolf-fang4 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I love it
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
I'm glad that you love it.
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PinkoPrint Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Student General Artist
So much detail.
Cute :hug:
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:iconilolamai:
ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Thank you very much.
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PinkoPrint Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Student General Artist
your welcome
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crtam4fun Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
The girl was well drawn(although she could be colored better...) and the perspective is nice, but the background isn't. Colors are oversatuated, especially the trees. Shadows are horrible. You are using soft shadows where they shouldn't be. Besides of your bad mixing of soft and hard shadows, the brightness od shadows don't match the light source.

For me it's hard to believe that someone with such good anatomy and perspective skill and who has drawn so much for so long is so bad at coloring. It also raise my suspicion of tracing, but I could be wrong...
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