Coloring technique used in SAI is above average for me. You have blended the colors well and good.And, is asuna in motion here? try to reconsider the motion blurring of her background.It may change the scene from what asuna was doing.Should have lessen the flowers flying around. it catches more attention than asuna herself. But overall, it's good! Keep up the good work. Take my words as a positive one. It's my personal point of view on your artwork as an otaku(anime enthusiast) and a digital artist. Nice artwork! Keep creating them for each and everyone here on deviant art.
the pose is has alot of impact,which makes the pic really cool.I also like coloring of the hair,its really pretty!the picture it self is amazing the way her clothes folds is really also nice!even though i would probley try another kind of back round to make her stand out more,but the flowers are still pretty!iI do like how the flowers are flying around too!i love the oringinality ,, !!keep up the good art work ,because u are really talanted in making your drawings !!!nice job!!!And lastly i love your other drawings that you make they are also really pretty nice too!!!
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Very nice work. Of all the pieces in the last few pages this is the only one to demand my full attention so I could get a better look. It certainly has impact. The two critiques are fair in my opinion but honestly I think a single one to mix both messages into a halfway would be perfect.